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Dear Dr. Fang,
I read your magazine every month, in which you often give many good suggestions to teenagers like me on their growing pains. Now, I'm writing to ask for your advice.
The main problem is that my mother has too high expectations on my study. Every time I watch TV or chat with my friends on the Internet, she will remind me not to waste time. She often compares my grades with the ones of her friends’ children. She seldom watches TV or listens to music at home in order to ensure me a quiet environment. Even when we go travelling, she keeps saying, “Baby, watch carefully, and prepare to write a diary”, which really destroys my passion in sightseeing.
Besides the subjects at school, she asks me to learn swimming, painting, playing the piano and reciting poems from Tang Dynasty. Even if I really do well in all of these, she will always have some new goals for me. For example, I can recite more than 100 poems, but I have to translate them into English just because she thinks it is necessary for a Chinese student to tell Chinese stories in English. Can you imagine my life? Every day I am as busy as a bee.
She seldom lets me eat out to avoid junk food. She puts the food that she thinks is healthy into my bowl as if I were a baby. Every day she forces me to eat fruits and she puts a bottle of chrysanthemum tea into my schoolbag even though I have complained it tastes like Chinese medicine!
I love my mom a lot, but I don't understand why she is so hard on me and I don't know what I should do to solve these problems. Can you show me some useful ways to better the relationship between us?
Best wishes,
Liu Xiaowei