附录1: AI交互日志模板(空白)
说明:本模板旨在以标准化形式记录学生与GAI的每次交互,为教学诊断提供过程性数据。建议在每次使用GAI后,通过在线问卷(如问卷星、腾讯问卷等)形式填写。
写作任务:______________________________________________________
记录日期:______________________________________________________
学生姓名:______________________________________________________
1.所使用的AI平台(AI Platform Used)
(请选择你本次使用的AI工具)
文心一言
DeepSeek
ChatGPT
豆包
通义千问
其他(请说明):_____________________________________________
2.原始提示词(Original Prompt)
(请在此处完整、准确地粘贴或输入你向AI发出的指令)
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3.求助目的(Purpose of Seeking Help)
(请选择你此次求助的主要目的)
语法修正(Grammar Correction)
词汇优化(Vocabulary Enhancement)
句子结构/流畅度(Sentence Structure/Fluency)
篇章结构/逻辑(Text Structure/Logic)
内容生成/构思(Content Generation/Ideation)
其他(请说明):___________________________________________________________________
4. AI的完整回复(AI's Response)
(请在此处完整粘贴或输入AI给出的回复内容)
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5.我的采纳决策(My Decision)
(请根据你的判断,选择对AI建议的处理方式)
全盘接受 (Fully Accepted):我未作修改,直接使用了AI的建议。
修改后接受(Accepted with Modifications):我参考了AI的建议,但进行了部分修改后再使用。
拒绝(Rejected):我未采纳AI的建议。
6.决策理由(Reason for Decision)
(请简要说明你做出以上选择的理由,这是培养元认知能力的关键一步)
示例:AI的修改更地道;AI的改动违背了我的原意;我融合了AI的建议和我自己的想法,使其更准确……
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附录2: GAI批量批改Prompt设计与单篇习作批改示例
一、GAI批量批改Prompt设计
Prompt 1: 这是一次高三英语读后续写练习,要求以“Taking a deep breath, Emily stepped forward.”和“Finally, the medical staff arrived.”为段首句展开续写,呈现Emily实施急救的过程及医护人员赶到后的场景,体现其从敷衍培训到珍视知识价值的心理成长。对照高考英语读后续写评分标准(满分25分),为每篇习作完成以下反馈:①划分评分等级(一类文23-25/二类上20-22/二类下17-19/三类文14-16/四类文0-13);②提炼写作优点;③精准标注语法、词汇、句式、篇章等方面的错误与不足,附具体修改建议。
Prompt 2: 对上述所有的批改反馈信息进行系统性统计,生成适配高中英语课堂讲评的图表,对照高考英语读后续写评分标准,从以下维度完成统计与呈现,要求数据清晰、维度明确,便于课堂快速解读和针对性讲评:1. 得分等级分布统计;2. 核心错误类型分布统计;3. 内容结构问题统计;4. 附100字以内的班级整体写作情况总结,精准指出核心优势、突出问题及课堂讲评重点方向,贴合高考备考需求。
(补充说明:每个账号因为前期投喂训练内容不一样,同一个Prompt也会有不一样的反馈,可根据产出情况继续迭代对话得到自己希望的产出结果)
二、 单篇习作批改示例

图1 学生原创习作示例
学生作文(一次可以上传10张图片,可先上传一篇得到想要的反馈后再批量批改):Taking a deep breath, Emily stepped forward. “I have took part in CPR training before, maybe I could give her a first aid.” Emily said with great seriousness. Despite uncertainty and inproficiency, she pushed through the crowd, her heart pounding not from running but from nervousness. Kneeling beside the elderly woman, she slightly remembered the training, her hands trembled as she placed them on the woman's chest, recalling Jane's voice, “Push hard and fast.” Ignoring the surrounding whispers, Emily focused solely on the rhythm. The woman's face remained pale, but Emily refused to give up, her own breath disordered with effort.
Finally, the medical staff arrived. They quickly took over, and Emily stepped back, her arms aching and body trembling. As the professionals worked, one medical worker nodded at her, “You did well, you kept her blood circulating.” Soon, the elderly woman showed signs of improvement, her lips regaining a colour. The other old woman grasped Emily's hand, tears contained in her eyes. “Thank you, girl! You saved her life.” Watching the ambulance drive away, Emily felt a profound relief and unexpected fulfillment. The free snacks from that training were long forgotten, but the value of that knowledge was now imprinted on her heart forever.
豆包的反馈:
一、作文等级评定(高考读后续写标准)
等级:二类上(或良好档,约20-22/25分)
符合题意,完成了急救过程与医护到场场景的续写,心理成长线索清晰。语言表达较流畅,细节描写较生动,句式有一定变化。存在少量语法错误与用词瑕疵,部分情节衔接可更紧凑,故未达到一类文标准。
二、优点
1. 情节完整,紧扣主题:完整呈现了Emily从犹豫到实施急救、再到医护到场后的完整过程,自然呼应了“从敷衍培训到珍视知识价值”的心理成长(结尾点题“the value of that knowledge was now imprinted on her heart forever”)。
2. 细节生动,画面感强:运用了大量动作与心理描写(heart pounding, hands trembled, focused solely on the rhythm, arms aching and body trembling),急救场景真实可感,情绪传递到位。
3. 语言表达丰富:使用了非谓语动词(Kneeling beside ..., Ignoring the surrounding whispers ...)、复合句及高级词汇(profound relief, imprinted on her heart),体现了较好的语言驾驭能力。
4. 逻辑连贯:两段段首句与段内过渡自然,急救过程与医护到场后的情节衔接流畅,结尾升华主题,符合读后续写的叙事要求。
三、语言错误与不足
1. 语法错误
时态错误:“I have took part”→应为“I have taken part”(现在完成时中,take的过去分词是taken)。
冠词误用:“give her the first aid”→应为“give her first aid”(“first aid”是固定搭配,零冠词);“regaining a colour”→应为“regaining colour”(此处表“恢复血色”,colour为不可数含义,不加冠词)。
名词单复数/搭配问题:“the other old woman”→语境中是这位老人的同伴,用“the old woman's companion”或“another old woman”更准确;“tears contained in her eyes”→更地道的表达是“tears in her eyes”或“tears welling up in her eyes”(现在分词表伴随,更生动);“felt a profound relief”→relief不可数,去掉a。
拼写/用词问题:“inproficiency”→应为“incompetence”(表“能力不足、欠缺”);“slightly remembered”可替换为“vaguely recalled”更贴合 “模糊回忆起”的状态。
2. 表达与逻辑不足
细节稍显单薄:急救过程中可增加更多感官细节(如按压的深度、频率,自己的体力消耗),让场景更具张力;心理变化可更细腻(如从“只记得培训片段”到“逐渐找回节奏”的过渡)。